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BATHALA: Makiling by josephcaesarsd BATHALA: Makiling by josephcaesarsd
Another of my Bathala character, Makiling.

This is her first appearance on the pages of Issue 1.

Panel 1
Makiling: Geo, The loss of your wife giving birth to your son, Kage, is not your fault.
Geo: W-who are you?! I must have drunk too much this time.
Makiling: You were never meant to live among men. Let go of your child and allow Dr. Steel to raise him for it will be too dangerous if THEY know about his powers.
Geo: How did you know about my son? Who are THEY?

Panel 2
Makiling: I am Makiling, from the House of Sorcerers, servant of your Father and a friend. I have agreed for you to live on this world on the condition that your memories are erased. I have made an oath to you that we will never cross paths again.

Panel 3
Makiling: (outside panel) I must break that oath in the direst of needs. We require you again for both our worlds are in peril.
Geo: You’re a sorceress? You must be talking to the wrong guy.

Panel 4
Makiling: You are the one that I seek. Having no knowledge of the truth does not change the fact. I will simply make you REMEMBER.
Geo: W-wait! What are you going to do?!

Panel 4
Geo: (SHOUT) EYAAARGH!!!

Another page of the book can be seen on this [link] , This is one of the villains' (Argan) first appearance
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:iconastigingboyipis:
astigingboyipis Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008
This is really amazing! When will this be released? Will it be released here in the Philippines?
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2008
Yep, it is primarily for Philippine release.
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:icongioparedes:
gioparedes Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
Geo?... hmmmm sana Gio na lang... hehehe
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:icongammaknight:
gammaknight Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
Ang pagbabalik!!!!
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:iconjtmtzrwj:
jtmtzrwj Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
pakisabihan kami pag lalabas nato sa market.... nostalgic... babalik mga old characters....
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:iconpaladin01:
Paladin01 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
si lam-ang po ba yan ser?
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Yep.
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:iconpaladin01:
Paladin01 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008
nakahanap po ako ng isang lumang issue sa kahon at nakalimutan ko na yung pala real name nya hehehehehe
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008
Buti ka pa, may copy pa din :-))
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:iconpaladin01:
Paladin01 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
medyo tanggal-tangal nga lang mga covers at may kunting punit, ser.
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2008
Mas mabuti pa din yan kaysa wala. Yung copies ko pati backups binaha e.
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:iconpaladin01:
Paladin01 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
whoa! binaha rin sa iyo? yung akin din eh hehehehe yung mga terminator, kidlat at kick fighter ko
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:iconjasonpaz:
jasonpaz Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Wow! Kelan labas neto ser? OGN? :D
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Hindi ko alam. Si Ludz ang nag-aayos ng project :-)

OGN?
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:iconjasonpaz:
jasonpaz Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Original
Graphic
Novel

format kumbaga ser?

Ganda eh!
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008
ah ok. May kasama to na ibang title afaik. mas madami yata pages yung book than a standard 22 pp. e
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:iconnefar007:
nefar007 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
eto pala mas matindi e. =D
:worship:
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:iconnagasane:
NaGaSaNe Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ayos aabangan q toh! hehehehehe! c",)
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:iconnerp:
nerp Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
nice pages!
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Thanks :-)
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:icondaverge:
daverge Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
nicely done.:D
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Thanks :-)
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:icondaverge:
daverge Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2008
no problem.:D
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radioactivespider1 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Bathala time!!! Im really excited for this one.
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Thanks :-)
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:iconrhardo:
rhardo Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
galing nyo talaga, idol!
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Salamat. Nakita ko na yung sketch mo ni Lam-ang. Pag na-ink mo na let me know :-)
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:iconrhardo:
rhardo Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehehe... sorry kung natagalan, sir. i will try my best to finish it next week. may hinahabol kasing deadline. sorry po talaga.
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
great looking inks and page layout! :thumbsup:
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Thanks. I had that page inked on Painter X.
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:iconwytherwing:
wytherwing Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
you're very welcome bro! :D
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:iconhumawinghangin:
humawinghangin Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
:faint: :clap:
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Salamat sa pagbisita ser :-)
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:iconjtmtzrwj:
jtmtzrwj Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
hmnn.... kage... dr steel... x-matrix un a
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Yep.
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butchmapa Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Ang galing sir!!! Especially love the contrasts and inks. You can really feel Geo's emotion on panel 3!
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
UY, nabisita ka, ser. Kamusta?
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:iconbutchmapa:
butchmapa Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2008
Ahehe, ganun pa rin ser! Kung anu-anu pinapasukan... :p

Ganda nitong mga pages niyo ser!!!
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:iconericalannelson:
ericalannelson Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Nice! Love the storytelling. Who is publishing this?
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Thanks! This book is meant for the Asian market though and one of our local publishers here will be distributing it.
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:iconmhaezthro:
mhaezthro Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
astig!
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Salamat :-)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
The artwork looks great. The dialogue is a little wooden in spots, but overall, tight.
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:iconjosephcaesarsd:
josephcaesarsd Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008
Yeah, they're stiff. As much as I try to soften it up I run into limits. The script was originally in our native language here. Perhaps on Issue three I can get help from one of my writer friends here. :-)
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:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Well, I'm not the greatest when it comes to dialogue, but I would probably approach it something like this:

Panel 1
Makiling: Geo, your wife died while giving birth to your son...what happened was not your fault.
Geo: What the heck?! Who are you?! Ugh, must have had way too much to drink...
Makiling: You were never meant to live among men. Let go of your child, and allow Dr. Steel to raise him. For it will be too dangerous if THEY knew about his powers.
Geo: How did you know about my son? And who the heck are THEY?

Panel 2
Makiling: I am Makiling, from the House of Sorcerers, servant of your Father and a friend. I have agreed to allow you to live on this world on the condition that your memories are erased. I have made an oath to you that we would never cross paths again.

Panel 3
Makiling: (outside panel) I must break that oath in the direst of needs. We require you again, for both our worlds are in peril!
Geo: You’re a what? A sorceress? (Yeah, I'm definitely drunk. Seeing things...hearing things...)

Panel 4
Makiling: You are the one that I seek. Having no knowledge of the truth does not change the fact. I will simply MAKE you remember!
Geo: W-wait! What are you going to do?!

Panel 4
Geo: (SHOUT) EYAAARGH!!!


Not much different, but a bit more "loosened up", particularly for the Geo character. Still, what's there now isn't bad, and what I've written might not even be as good from another's point of view.
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Gears24 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2008
Awesome comic, that's Marvel quality comic right there.
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